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YungiBear says!:

YungiBear, August 22nd, 2007, 12:43 pm

... HI! :D
Why did I suddenly update? 'cuz I thought that I should probably do something to keep me drawing. Read news post for more? @ w@

Well, I just want to say that it was a little hard to retain the original style of the comic, since I've kinda moved onto soft coloring and painting my CGs.That, and I find inking very tedious, now. > x<

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xkrazydog, August 22nd, 2007, 1:26 pm

Grey is such an adorable lil duckling xD. *huggles*

NotAwake, August 22nd, 2007, 3:24 pm

Oop. So Grey is in gr 1 ;D The crayon pictures in the background are so cute ;D I remember those! So cute ;D

Sam4books, August 23rd, 2007, 9:19 am

God I miss the good old days.....

No-Name9, August 23rd, 2007, 2:19 pm

Wonderful page!

I love how you color your comic. :)

animelover15001, August 24th, 2007, 2:09 am

yeah!!! update!! i agree i love how you color your comic as well. can;t wait for the next update!! grey is sooo cute too on the page too!!! :D

Akizu, October 9th, 2007, 6:20 pm

OMGsh an update! SQUEE! >w<
Awesome...Grey has such cute expressions! ^^

The OnLooker (Guest), October 19th, 2007, 8:31 pm

This is both badly drawn AND confusing.

Backgrounds are way out of proportion, it doesn't even look like you put any effort into it.
I've learned to tolerate the classic "animu" style but if you're going to use it, use it well.

Aside from that, the characters.
Nice name, Grey, for a little girl, who has similar fashion sense to Brittney-Spears. For a kid living with a single SIBLING (not even a single, parent) they must have some inheritance to afford such sharp clothing.

I'll admit, some panels are cute. But think about your story next time, plan things out before you cg your heart out with blushy faces and unnaturally colored hair. Don't leave so many plot-holes so early in the story. For God's sake we don't even know if there is a plot aside from this kid being cute at her first day of school.

YungiBear, October 19th, 2007, 9:55 pm

Thanks for telling me this, but the drawings from this comic was from about a year ago. I'm aware that this was badly drawn and I didn't have any fashion sense back then.

But I'm wondering why you're flaming me? I don't know what stepped on your tail, but you might want to consider that this comic is pretty old and I've moved on.

~random (Guest), November 23rd, 2007, 12:46 am

die 'The OnLooker '
that was soooo mean !all i have to say is die'The OnLooker' ...... i love ur art yungi bear!! keep it up....and Grey does not have similar fashion sense to Brittney Spears.

amypaki, January 27th, 2008, 10:12 am

grey is adorable!!!! *rated*

Inakit sure<3 (Guest), May 8th, 2008, 11:06 am

I loved this comic!! It's soooo typical that all the comics I like is ending so quickly... =( But I hope you'll update!!!! <3<3

SchnozPatch, November 25th, 2008, 11:12 am

Hi, I'm a new reader (And apparently alone now >> ) and I've enjoyed this comic so far. I think the art is cute, a nice break from the usual stuff I read.
If you do decide to pick this back up, I'd love to see the improvements to the story (because there could be some).
I hope that you do well on your future endeavors (artistic or otherwise)

winnez, February 5th, 2009, 2:43 am

Very colorful . Which i think is ironic since the title is completely the opposite . Don't conform to conventions .Contort and create .Who cares if a kid dresses up like Britney spears? In my opinion , this comic is great. Stories without plans are one of surprises .

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