Comics - Page 7 - 20 Aug 2006 11:21 pm
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LOLZ Homies~:
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catqueen13, 21 Aug 2006 09:19 am
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Cool page anyway
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Arnion, 27 Aug 2006 11:34 am
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Yeah, a little bare, but with good reason; thanks for keeping up with the update, despite! It still looks good, albeit circumstance keeps it from being at its full potential.
Though, a minor note of constructive criticism -- looking over the total pages at the moment, it feels to me that too many pages are spent in the car, story-telling-wise. It could take fewer pages to communicate that their characters, they're moving, and the car crash. So that's my two cents. Its not like its very practical to go back and redraw the pages to fit a fewer page quota thing, so all it can be is future reference stuff, if you want to take the criticism. X3
So yeah. Hearts!
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YungiBear, 27 Aug 2006 05:33 pm
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Thank you! ^~^
I'll take that into consideration. x3
But I don't really want to delete extra pages or rework them... It's like erasing all my hard work. xDD
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JKN, 06 Nov 2006 12:08 am
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Ever notice...
Whenever there's an "almost car-crash" scene in anything, it always involves driving in front of a big truck? XD
But anyway, I like this comic :D Fav'd.
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flying-angel, 13 Jan 2008 08:07 pm
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ROFL!!!! good job little sister!!
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