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YungiBear, November 12th, 2006, 11:44 pm


Oi. Whatta half arsed page.

** head bang **

I've had no motivation for drawing lately, so please, excuse the crappiness. > 3<;




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LOLZ Homies~:

nostalgia (Guest), November 12th, 2006, 11:54 pm


<-put comment on other page too.

AHA I WAS RITE, RITE. ;D

still nice page to moi ;o. HURRRR.


YungiBear, November 12th, 2006, 11:57 pm


Rite?

o 3o;


nostalgia (Guest), November 13th, 2006, 12:00 am


^wrote that in a hurry cause i had to go to the bathroom >_>;;

i forgot to say===== O:

if you add concentration lines to the eye panel, it adds more EYE POPPIN' feelin' 8D

like... black lines emerging from the corners/sides towards the eye. more lines=more dramatic effect :D

LYK WOAHHHZ.


YungiBear, November 13th, 2006, 12:02 am


I tried that already, but it really distracted from the entire thing. Like, you'd see that before the first part.

... Which is bad. > 3<;


nostalgia (Guest), November 13th, 2006, 12:05 am


mmm, i don't know what those lines are called, but you could add vertical lines that fade downward in the top panels behind le peoples :D. maybe that'll even it out ^__^.

aaand mebbe extending the black block all the way across the page would break off the scenes more O:.

p.s. what does 'tut-ah-tut' mean? o.o *randomly came to mind*

have to go brush me teeth now >>. puahaha. no more INSTANTE REPILES-EH. D:

-i just edited this 4 times!-


tRickityHouses, November 13th, 2006, 12:51 am


I love.... This comic BAYAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! FAN


Spoony, November 13th, 2006, 10:18 am


Actually, I quite liked this page. Head's a little big in the last panel, but it's put together really well. SUSPENZE! OH NOES! Someone needs to eat some Ramen in this comic. I demand it.


zorro (Guest), November 13th, 2006, 12:21 pm


Ooooh...

Flashback...

Interesting.


phere (Guest), November 13th, 2006, 8:43 pm

I agree with Spoony
You should have a ramen eating person, at least in the background. Anyway, I like the Splater Effect, and the Black pannel. The Wait! in white looks natural, and the Cut at the top is perfect. Although I'm confused about the angle that the female is in.. I see breasts going >> That way, and a body going ^^ that way.

[Tries to put body in that position] Its plauseable, but its kinda painfull...


Alice (Guest), November 14th, 2006, 6:42 pm


Ooh.. I like the drowning affect (the bubbles and everything...)
Bad nightmare... bad nightmare...
What have you done to poor Jason?? >____<


Akizu, November 15th, 2006, 2:37 pm

o_O
Oooh...I wanna see what this is about! xD


YungiBear, November 15th, 2006, 6:38 pm


TrickityHouses: Thank you! Glad you like! x33333

Spoony: Ramen~ xD

I guess that -could- be fitted in somewhere. xD

Zorro: Actually, it's a dream. x3 But whatever~ Same difference, right~? ;D

Phere: Yeah, I see that. x3 Thanks for the critique!

Alice: Bloody, actually. BUT~ Whatever. x3

I've done nothing to him. ;3

Akizu: Heeee~ It won't be all emo-ee like this for long. x3


kitsume0123, November 16th, 2006, 3:40 pm


Aw!
I want to read more!


Skorie (Guest), November 16th, 2006, 7:56 pm

*luff*
Suspense! I luff this so much. Oh and the, my left so, Jason's right eye kind of bugs me. Says the person who can barely draw... <333


Mad~Madisson (Guest), November 18th, 2006, 12:38 pm


Hey, I'm from Gaia Online. Just wanted to take a peek at your stuff and I don't know how many times it's been said, but it really is cute. Grey reminds me a lot of Yotsuba&!. ^^


nostalgia (Guest), November 18th, 2006, 4:32 pm


ARRIIIIIIIGHT UPDATE TOMORROOOOW YEEESSS

-looser who checks everyday D:-


SAD SAD TOASTER MADE OF GLASS XD (Guest), November 18th, 2006, 10:01 pm

>_>
Post another page D:
Right when I start to like it, it ends >_<


Phere (Guest), November 18th, 2006, 11:09 pm


HA! Advertiseing in every post works XD


Tacto, November 19th, 2006, 4:03 pm


Oh oh! Looks like some painful past here! Suspense!!
Thank you for your comment on IE :-), and yes, I think it is better to go by dA to find me and more
info on IE. Wirepop site is very cool too (it will get easier to interact there when I get a IE Forum though)


Kira-lin, August 9th, 2007, 10:58 am


OMG flashback!! Ha.. It's all so cute. ^^


amypaki, January 27th, 2008, 10:36 am


You draw amazing!!!!!!!!!
even better than me Haha
please update more its intersting


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